How to Be Your Own Editor

When you start writing, you generally start writing for yourself, for your own pleasure in finding the right words to express your feelings. Some people start writing to give others pleasure, such as A.A.Milne who wrote the famous Winnie the Pooh books for his beloved son, Christopher, but it is often a small audience at first, so those little errors don’t really matter.

 However, when you want to publish your writing, you do need to care about presenting a clean copy with no errors for the publisher to read. You need to edit your own work before you give it to a publisher. Editing is a completely different skill to writing, so it is not always easy to edit your own work. In fact, it is often easier to edit someone else’s work, because you are less familiar with it. The author often knows what is intended by a particular sentence, but the reader becomes confused. The main trick to editing your own work is to look at it as if you are reading someone else’s work for the first time.

 Ask yourself questions, such as:

  • Does that sentence make sense?
  • Have I left out important information that would help the reader make sense of my writing?
  • Does my writing flow from paragraph to paragraph in a smooth manner, or do I repeat myself?
  • What questions do I have after reading this?
  • Am I assuming the reader has the same knowledge I do?

If you write at a computer, it is a good idea to print out your article and proofread from the printed copy. It makes it easier to spot the simple errors, such as the typographical errors, and you can circle the error quickly and keep reading. Edit the entire piece and then go back to the computer to make all the changes, so that you don’t forget anything.

Read your writing aloud. This helps you to spot the instances of awkward wording or phrasing, because you will naturally stumble over the words when you read them aloud. If it doesn’t sound natural when you read, you need to do some editing.

I’ve often heard authors say that the first draft is nothing like the published version, and that’s probably a good thing! Editing and proofreading is a continual process that adds the technical side of writing to our work. We all need to polish our writing until it shines and reaches to the heart of the reader.

 Hayley

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A Day In the Life of the Editor

Thought I’d share with you a typical, or rather not so typical writing day with you.

Friday 8.30am. Normally this is when I start home-schooling my daughter, but today she is feeling ill so I decide to work on a submission instead. Normally my writing time is late afternoon/early evening so this is a bit of change for me.

I settle my daughter down on the sofa with CBBC (for those of you who don’t live in the UK this is an advertisement free childrens’ channel) and I get down to work.

10.30am first draft done I check for typos and grammar then go for a coffee and to get my girl a drink and snack.

Mull over the piece I’ve written; it’s missing something. Half-an hour later I’ve figured out what needs to be done and it’s back to the laptop. One hour later, 2nd draft is done. It reads better but is by no means perfect. On checking the word count I’ve written 2000 words and that’s a problem as the magazine I’m submitting too only want 1,700 max. Time to get editing. This isn’t actually too much of a problem as I usually just remove the first three or four paragraphs and find that the piece works just as well from this point on. The reason? Well, I suspect like many of you when I start to write a piece my brain is still warming up to the material and getting into writing mode; even with my outline in front of me my brain still takes at least three or four paragraphs to get warmed up. Whilst many of these are fine paragraphs they are usually on reflection surplus to requirements. So out with the carefully constructed opener, this was a hard decision as it was very good and I spent a while writing it. Then out with the following three paragraphs and suddenly the piece is a lot tighter, sharper and nearer the 1,700 words mark.

A quick break to make lunch and then it’s time to print it out and read through again, line by line, picking up typos the laptop didn’t, such as it instead of is, and removing unnecessary words.

At 12.30pm I’m down to 1690 words. Perfect! A final check through and off it goes. Job done!

What is your writing day like? Let us know in the forum.

Dawn

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